(05-10-2010, 10:04 PM)GundamQuatro Wrote:(05-10-2010, 05:44 PM)Arpit Wrote:now, help me write a better intro for the novel(05-10-2010, 01:53 AM)GundamQuatro Wrote: thx for the help arpit
WELCOME!!!
Once upon a time, in the void of noobness, some great idiots have created a new dimensions, which upon impact, made others noob..
That was, computer...
After making millions of people noob, he became stronger and more vivid in his vicious form...
He became more compact so he can make every home his victim...
But some rebellion, with their hardwork to their last breath, created even noober creature than the computer itself. That is DOLPHINator...
There, Happy???